A fantastic writing!

 

I did not read it carefully. I will find time to read it again later.

 

- fast-pace - fast-paced

 

- two hotties that I would not complain looking at either - two hotties whom I would not complain looking at either (I am not sure, but feel that “whom” should be used here)

 

 

 

 

 

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• 谢谢，大谢，两处都改过来了。 -viewfinder- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/11/2012 postreply 14:53:56

• I read it one more time, -NewVoice- ♀ (2924 bytes) () 01/11/2012 postreply 16:57:01

• 实在太感谢了！你真厉害。那个"carry"该得尤其棒。 -viewfinder- ♀ (125 bytes) () 01/11/2012 postreply 18:42:46