sorry to jump in. i thought that the cloak was made by sedge (蒲草

in addition, “before West Hills”. can we say “in front of West Hills, or ”in a valley of West Hills". 

never tried by myself and do't know the regulation of the field, but i enjoy reading your translations.  

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• Thanks for your shrewd comments. From the perspective of meaning -聚曦亭- ♀ (315 bytes) () 08/09/2017 postreply 06:11:03

• thanks for proving nice explanations. 谢谢， 问好！ -槛外長江- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2017 postreply 07:00:47

• 也问好！ -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2017 postreply 07:33:56

• 这是一个疑惑，翻译应不应用翻译语言的格律？用原来的语言写诗尚且有“吟安一个字，拈断数茎须”才内容与形式统一。 -中间小谢- ♂ (1003 bytes) () 08/09/2017 postreply 11:32:39

• 反过来想， -聚曦亭- ♀ (825 bytes) () 08/09/2017 postreply 15:12:41

• 所以，翻译是一种折衷， -聚曦亭- ♀ (98 bytes) () 08/09/2017 postreply 15:19:50

• 我的想法恰是不能折衷，因为折衷导致把原作平庸化。 -中间小谢- ♂ (378 bytes) () 08/09/2017 postreply 16:00:50

• 不折中，寸步难行， -聚曦亭- ♀ (624 bytes) () 08/09/2017 postreply 16:46:11

• 我们对这首诗的理解有差异。 -中间小谢- ♂ (551 bytes) () 08/10/2017 postreply 08:23:42

• 我们偏题了。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (904 bytes) () 08/10/2017 postreply 08:56:41

• 如果是这个意义上的折衷，确实是不可避免的。 -中间小谢- ♂ (144 bytes) () 08/10/2017 postreply 11:20:01