试翻译李白的 望天门山 (原创)

(以前是做汉英翻译的, 多是现代题材. 古诗词的翻译基本没作过.
自从出了国,几年来,再没搞文学方面的翻译.脑子生锈了!
此次权当练个手, 再献个丑. 欢迎大家不吝赐教, 感激不已!!)


望天门山
李白

天门中断楚江开,
碧水东流至此回.
两岸青山相对出,
孤帆一片日边来.

Viewing Mountain Heaven's Gate From Afar
written by Li Bai
translated by love9999


Cutting through Mountain Heaven's Gate, the Yangtse River roars

Green currents surging east turn here in fierce whirls

On both river banks, thrust forward green mountains

A lone boat sails forth from where the sun beams

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• love9999 翻译的真好。 -林贝卡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2007 postreply 07:53:08

• It's a hard & good work! -edrifter- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2007 postreply 15:53:56

• Thank you! -love9999- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2007 postreply 20:24:51

• nice job! thanks for sharing it. -YuGong- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2007 postreply 18:05:10

• Thank you. I kept my promise. :) -love9999- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2007 postreply 20:25:19

• I appreciate it. Good weekend. -YuGong- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/11/2007 postreply 08:09:54

• 回复：试翻译李白的 望天门山 (原创) -宋德利利- ♂ (521 bytes) () 08/11/2007 postreply 11:30:43

• 前辈实在是谦虚了!! -love9999- ♀ (130 bytes) () 08/12/2007 postreply 14:44:54