回复：急！ 求翻译：薄云朦冷月，夜幕锁香魂。俱素清寒处，红颜不染尘。

I make some changes, based on your version.

Thin clouds shade the cold moon;

The curtain of night locks the fragrant soul.

Where in the pale chilliness,

The red cheeks are free from dust.

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• 谢谢！ -鸣凡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2010 postreply 09:06:17

• like this: Where in the pale chilliness, The red cheeks are fre -桃花涧- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2010 postreply 16:24:52