回复：great translation. i like it very much. thanks.

来源: swater 于 2010-05-16 13:18:06 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (283 bytes)
回答: To Mywedding---the final version 由 swater 于 2010-05-16 10:22:08

Thanks for nice comments, Eagle.

It can be improved in many ways, like "occasion" replaced with "ceremony", "get old" with "grow old", and "warm" in the end line with "caring".

Hopefully, Mywedding will notice these modifications in the final printing.

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• 回复：回复：great translation. i like it very much. thanks. -Mywedding- ♀ 给 Mywedding 发送悄悄话 (306 bytes) () 05/16/2010 postreply 13:25:45

• 回复：回复：回复：great translation. i like it very much. thanks. -Swater- ♂ 给 Swater 发送悄悄话 (88 bytes) () 05/16/2010 postreply 15:31:48

• 回复：回复：回复：回复：great translation. i like it very much. thanks. -Mywedding- ♀ 给 Mywedding 发送悄悄话 (50 bytes) () 05/16/2010 postreply 20:33:33

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