回复:great translation. i like it very much. thanks.

来源: 2010-05-16 13:18:06 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读:

Thanks for nice comments, Eagle.

It can be improved in many ways, like "occasion" replaced with "ceremony", "get old" with "grow old", and "warm" in the end line with "caring".

Hopefully, Mywedding will notice these modifications in the final printing.