rhyme or no rhyme, feelings climb...

来源: bearsback 于 2010-02-28 17:59:14 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (410 bytes)
回答: i am a little down 由 bearsback 于 2010-02-28 11:53:51

sweetie, thank you. what a lovely poem. i love the 3rd stanza very much, how sentimental. after i wrote this and went back to the chinese notes you put, i realized that this is 倒数第二段. how you and i think alike.
sweetie, never let rhyme control your mind. from now on, i ask you to throw away rhyme. it confines one's thoughts and chain one's feelings.
sweetie, i miss you too (very much).

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• thanks。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (436 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 19:17:22

• sweetie, yes, in free verse -bearsback- ♂ 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (102 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 19:28:57

• 谢谢指教。练了一首梨花诗 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (251 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 19:53:25

• sweetie, yes, that's it. let feelings speak -bearsback- ♂ 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (213 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 21:02:15

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