thanks。

来源: 戏雨飞鹰 于 2010-02-28 19:17:22 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (436 bytes)
回答: 凑了首儿歌。瞎凑了一首：） 由 戏雨飞鹰 于 2010-02-28 15:05:05

i know rhyming can make the poems flow well. but most of time,expression is more important than impression. when rhyming make us uncomfortable to express, we have to compromise.

secondly, if you are quite into old poetry you'd rhyme, just like you write sonnets. no rhyming,no sonnet:). but if you are into quite modern types,you would not always rhyme. correct?

all in all, depends on if you can express the poetry best.

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• sweetie, yes, in free verse -bearsback- ♂ 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (102 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 19:28:57

• 谢谢指教。练了一首梨花诗 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (251 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 19:53:25

• sweetie, yes, that's it. let feelings speak -bearsback- ♂ 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (213 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 21:02:15

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