我想了好久，还是不认识你。对我来讲，依然迷惑

just为什么突然消失了。

When you are gone i lose control
as if i drove in the dark night
there are no lines and no lights
how can i know which way to go

when you are here my place is clear
You make the darkness disappear
I feel so bright when you stay near
how can you walk away leaving me here

o, please let the sun reappear
guide me out of the shadow, dear

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• see this free syle one, -HuHuYa- ♀ (836 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 21:47:26

• i am so impressed...it is so well written -bearsback- ♂ (88 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 22:08:20

• i wrote it a couple of days ago. not tonight:) -HuHuYa- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 22:12:42

• these two lines are so good -bearsback- ♂ (82 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 22:13:35

• this line is also very good -bearsback- ♂ (68 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 22:34:04

• lovely, it is so lovely. 亲爱的， 我们不认识， 但我们的心在 -bearsback- ♂ (249 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 22:00:01