well written...

来源: 振一 于 2009-12-08 21:30:05 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (482 bytes)
本帖于 2009-12-12 05:50:14 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑

教主,俺不懂写作,就从语法上吹毛求疵吧:
1. typo: wrtten->written
2. "similar to get a driving license": I thought "to" here is a prep., if so, it should be followed by a noun or a gerund instead of a verb.
3. "The rule of obtaining diving license": you listed multiple items, maybe it should be "rules" here?
4. "PADI requires you fill...": maybe "PADI requires you to fill.."?
5. "teachers were busy in handling": maybe "teachers were busy handling"?

所有跟帖： 

• Agree。谢谢振一的修改。 -任我为- ♂ 给 任我为 发送悄悄话 任我为 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/09/2009 postreply 02:44:55

请您先登陆，再发跟帖！