其实,是我没说清楚。我还是对haiku感到confused。

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回答: 还是我搞错了。你是对的。:)戏雨飞鹰2009-12-08 14:21:58

I know it combines 3 different lines and a noticeable grammatical break(kireji).
but from yugong's haiku above, I couldn't find the obvious grammatical break even though it does have 3 lines.

I read most of your haikus, which have 3 lines but actually only 2 complete sentences. usually 1st sentence takes 2 lines with a BREAK between them.

however, I did find some haikus this afternoon that can contain 3 complete sentences, 1 sentence each line.

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You are now my teacher in literature as well as in music. -YuGong- 给 YuGong 发送悄悄话 YuGong 的博客首页 (292 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 19:16:43

我是个假诗人 -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (932 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 19:47:52

回复:我是个假诗人 -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (142 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:14:26

好啊,现在没那么多经力和时间小资呀。我一切稳定下来,会的。 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (62 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:39:48

What? -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (151 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 21:03:49

真写了?! -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (99 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 21:26:17

sweetie I am glad you liked the cake. You know me, i -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (58 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 21:35:02

回复:我是个假诗人 -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (173 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:19:58

谢谢啊,把底细说的那么仔细,就不怕我们 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (42 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:32:47

一年半 -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (85 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:44:51

你有天赋。 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (50 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:49:31

谢假肢人老师的不惜赐教。收益非浅。:) -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (426 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:27:02

Sweetie -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (42 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:39:58

这句话足可以让我忘掉这周的deadline的压力了,hehe。 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:44:56

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