我是个假诗人

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回答: really?bearsback2009-12-08 18:12:01

就古典诗歌来讲,英文讲究meter和form。form有sonnet,ballad等。meter也不同,通常是轻音/重音 入 at last (at unstressed,last stressed)。in a sonnet,每行都应该五个这样的unit,一共10个音节(similar to 5 alternate 平仄 pair in Chinese) 。当然还要押韵。英文poem(古典)是看syllable数,not number of words in a line. Some of what I wrote (sonnets) followed the rules, some didn't.
As for haiku, originally it required 575, where each number indicates the number of syllables (not words) in the corresponding line. Later they relaxed the requirement (in terms of syllable count). Right looks like there is a grammatical change or something, but I never delved into it. Classic poems are much more difficult to write.
Of course there are many nonclassic poems that are just as good such as the raven (from Poe). Whitman might be the first who broke the ground in free verse. Certainly there are music and rhythm in those.
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回复:我是个假诗人 -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (142 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:14:26

好啊,现在没那么多经力和时间小资呀。我一切稳定下来,会的。 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (62 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:39:48

What? -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (151 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 21:03:49

真写了?! -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (99 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 21:26:17

sweetie I am glad you liked the cake. You know me, i -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (58 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 21:35:02

回复:我是个假诗人 -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (173 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:19:58

谢谢啊,把底细说的那么仔细,就不怕我们 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (42 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:32:47

一年半 -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (85 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:44:51

你有天赋。 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (50 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:49:31

谢假肢人老师的不惜赐教。收益非浅。:) -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (426 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:27:02

Sweetie -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (42 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:39:58

这句话足可以让我忘掉这周的deadline的压力了,hehe。 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:44:56

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