I am so grateful for your re-drafting and correction. I should honestly admit that your version is indeeed much better than mine.
This is exactly what I hope and expect from you: inputs, comments,corrections, edition and so on.
It seens that I need to learn more and more deeply the grammar.
How about the second part of my article? Please continue to correct me.
感谢修改,的确增色很多,
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you might beg one of sisters here to correct the second half
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10/13/2009 postreply
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