you might beg one of sisters here to correct the second half

来源: checkingaround 于 2009-10-13 15:02:25 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (353 bytes)
回答: edited your speech a little bit. 由 checkingaround 于 2009-10-13 08:55:48

Your second half is much better written than the first half. I have committed two careless errors in my edited version if you could spot them, so I stop here to avoid embarrassing myself more. If you could beg the best lady English writer (you know whom she is) here to correct your second half, she will add some girl-like vividness into your wriitng.

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