as light and graceful as the rain on the stream
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• Nice!把heavy改成light,把and改成on,把wind 改成stream如何? -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 12:59:07
• 好,我瞎写的,并不合意(没对上上一句),你随便改或不用,我没任何意见。完了我就删我的哈 :-) -最西边的岛上- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 13:05:19
• 非常棒!用enclosed rhyme 都对上了!童鞋们,接着接龙啊!已经写出9句了,很棒!再写7句就大功告成了:) -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 13:21:41
• We’re like dandelions holding small umbrellas -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 13:23:22
• dandelions with umbrellas? what a funny & nice image, hahaha -最西边的岛上- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 13:32:05
• 每一只蒲公英的种子都是一只小雨伞啊!不然它怎么会如此浪漫:) -妖妖灵- ♀ (82 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 13:35:26
• which shelter us from thunderstorm and hailstorm -最西边的岛上- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 15:13:10
• 如果这句能用的话,算7G兄的哈;-),因为我已经蹭过两次他的新闻填空了。谢谢! -最西边的岛上- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 15:33:42
• 好,point taken!能否换成the thunderstorm?这样容易押韵 -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 17:03:49
• 改了,又加了一个 hailstorms,不然觉得有点短。可以吗? 谢谢 -最西边的岛上- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/22/2024 postreply 17:50:49
• 我觉得挺好!能不用复数吗? -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/23/2024 postreply 17:19:03
• We huddle and hold together to stay warm -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/23/2024 postreply 19:40:52
• And light up each other's sky like estrellas -甜虫虫- ♀ (65 bytes) () 05/23/2024 postreply 22:04:55
• Amazing!!!等我有时间把整首歌词呈现出来:) -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2024 postreply 08:51:00
• Great! It's a nice poem. You inspired me :) -甜虫虫- ♀ (58 bytes) () 05/24/2024 postreply 10:24:17