We make lemonade when life offers a lime
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as light and graceful as the rain on the stream
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05/22/2024 postreply
09:35:15
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Nice!把heavy改成light,把and改成on,把wind 改成stream如何?
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05/22/2024 postreply
12:59:07
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好,我瞎写的,并不合意(没对上上一句),你随便改或不用,我没任何意见。完了我就删我的哈 :-)
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05/22/2024 postreply
13:05:19
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非常棒!用enclosed rhyme 都对上了!童鞋们,接着接龙啊!已经写出9句了,很棒!再写7句就大功告成了:)
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05/22/2024 postreply
13:21:41
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We’re like dandelions holding small umbrellas
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05/22/2024 postreply
13:23:22
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dandelions with umbrellas? what a funny & nice image, hahaha
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05/22/2024 postreply
13:32:05
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每一只蒲公英的种子都是一只小雨伞啊!不然它怎么会如此浪漫:)
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05/22/2024 postreply
13:35:26
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which shelter us from thunderstorm and hailstorm
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05/22/2024 postreply
15:13:10
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如果这句能用的话,算7G兄的哈;-),因为我已经蹭过两次他的新闻填空了。谢谢!
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05/22/2024 postreply
15:33:42
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好,point taken!能否换成the thunderstorm?这样容易押韵
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05/22/2024 postreply
17:03:49
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改了,又加了一个 hailstorms,不然觉得有点短。可以吗? 谢谢
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05/22/2024 postreply
17:50:49
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我觉得挺好!能不用复数吗?
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05/23/2024 postreply
17:19:03
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We huddle and hold together to stay warm
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05/23/2024 postreply
19:40:52
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And light up each other's sky like estrellas
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05/23/2024 postreply
22:04:55
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Amazing!!!等我有时间把整首歌词呈现出来:)
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05/24/2024 postreply
08:51:00
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Great! It's a nice poem. You inspired me :)
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05/24/2024 postreply
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