Impression, End of Year (3). 岁末印象（三）

【七律】岁末印象（三）

 

沧桑跌宕一年中，荏苒蹉跎百岁同。

雁阵尖尖飞似箭，鹅行曲曲去如弓。

长河落日喝红酒，大漠孤城沫晚风。

再到青春需几日，依稀岁月逝无穷。

 

Impression， End of Year (Poem 3)

 

The year has been full of ups and downs.

It flew by like the many past years

with ordinary pains and gains.

 

Going away is the wild geese formation,

sometimes sharp like an arrow,

sometimes bent like a bow.

Are they launching themselves into the future?

 

The setting sun lowers himself

to drink red wine in the long river.

The lonely city in the desert

is immersed in the evening breeze.

 

How many days will it take to reach youth again?

It seems time is passing by endlessly.

 

(© December 31, 2023, godog)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 你的三个印象，表达了无限的情绪，有婉约，豪情，寥落，等等，体会出古汉语表达不靠语法，靠韵 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 10:36:03

• +100086！ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 10:42:23

• +100086！花木兄评得好，评得到位！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 11:20:53

• 他老兄要再来第四五六个印象，我们还得升级点评去 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 11:23:03

• 新年即至，Go兄接着写，我们接着跟着花木兄升级点评：） -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 11:28:26

• 不能同意更多了！：）） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 13:18:41

• 哈哈，岁末印象就到此了，写完三首，脑子里有点空空如也 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 20:24:44

• 谢谢，移花兄评得在行。人的情绪是无限的，艺术，包括诗歌，只能抓住一点点，而且很难，这是艺术家们努力追求的东西 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 20:23:13

• 占位点赞, 好七律。颔联尤其写得好看，读到了诗人的想象力！ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 10:42:55

• 谢谢盈盈鼓励。新年快乐！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 20:25:28

• Very poignant and sentimental, lovely poem. -waterfowl- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 11:16:29

• Thank you! -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 20:25:53

• 三首古诗经典啊，婉约，一丝丝落寞，sentimental, 真的很喜欢！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 11:25:40

• Go兄很认真，很用心，也很有才气！新年快乐！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 11:26:19

• 谢谢喜欢，谢谢鼓励。新年快乐！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 20:26:33

• 中英诗词都见功力，厉害！新年快乐！ -唐歌- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 12:12:42

• 谢谢鼓励。新年快乐！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 20:27:11

• 赞双语诗，新年好！ -卫宁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 12:49:00

• +100 ！ -Oona- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 14:52:42

• 谢谢。祝两位新年快乐！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 20:27:56

• Nice poems! Happy New Year! -甜虫虫- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 17:38:29

• Thank you! Happy New Year! -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/31/2023 postreply 20:28:23

• 万象更新，新年快乐！ -古树羽音- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/01/2024 postreply 01:30:30