A Lone Wild Goose. 孤雁

That day in the early winter was freezing cold. I drove to the lake in the evening just to have a change of scenery and have some fresh air. The lake started to freeze up. I saw a lone wild goose standing next to the reeds by the lake, shivering. I suspected that it was unwell due to cold and hunger. How did it get separated from its group? It’ll be difficult to get by on its own. After observing it for a while, I went home. I still thought about it late at night, wondering whether it could survive the long cold night.

 

【七律】孤雁

 

癸卯初冬日,天寒地冻。向晚驱车至湖边,湖水已结冰。见一孤雁立于湖边芦苇丛旁,瑟瑟发抖,疑是受冻挨饿而身不适。观察良久而归,至深夜仍甚念之,不知它能否挨过漫长寒夜。

 

病雁立身芦苇边,孤茕冻水与霜天。

曾飞云里常承爱,已了世间应有缘。

此处冰心连朔漠,当时紫霭笼山川。

平安保你生寒夜,再次相逢又一年。

 

(© December 2, 2023, godog)

 

 

 

 

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此处冰心连朔漠,当时紫霭笼山川。对仗工整,此处颈联写得好看。颔联,读起来心有戚戚。 -盈盈一笑间- 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 13:23:40

希望这种共鸣是美好的 -godog- 给 godog 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 16:29:19

曾飞云里常承爱,已了世间应有缘。Go兄心柔软细腻,此诗立意好,对仗工整,诗前的短文言简意赅,赞! -暖冬cool夏- 给 暖冬cool夏 发送悄悄话 暖冬cool夏 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 13:37:45

Go兄心柔软细腻,此/诗立意好,对仗工整,诗前的短文言简意赅 +100086 -盈盈一笑间- 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 15:07:21

谢谢暖冬温暖的鼓励:)) -godog- 给 godog 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 16:33:05

“平安保你生寒夜,再次相逢又一年” 诗人宅心仁厚,跃然纸上。 -ToClouds- 给 ToClouds 发送悄悄话 ToClouds 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 13:50:14

诗人宅心仁厚,跃然纸上。+100086 -盈盈一笑间- 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 15:04:32

谢谢你这么说 -godog- 给 godog 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 16:36:06

赞!it’s a nice inspiration for a free-style poem:) -忒忒绿- 给 忒忒绿 发送悄悄话 忒忒绿 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 14:17:00

Hope it can inspire you to write a nice poem -godog- 给 godog 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 16:38:17

赞GO兄双语诗! -卫宁- 给 卫宁 发送悄悄话 卫宁 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 17:28:05

本地也可看到寒冬腊月中,孤雁孤鹭在寒水中独钓寒江雪呢。 -古树羽音- 给 古树羽音 发送悄悄话 古树羽音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 21:17:16

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