Thoughts Go Far Away on A Late Autumn Day

Thoughts Go Far Away on A Late Autumn Day

 

The early sun hovers above

the village outside the city.

A piece of red cloud falls onto a maple

tree where the autumn ripens.

 

A flock of birds calling for each other,

loud and clear, to go somewhere.

They fly through the woods,

a few leaves knocked down,

gone is also their singing sound.

 

After the candle in my heart goes out,

I can no longer shed more tears.

In order for the eyes of my mind to see further, I have climbed up for years.

 

So I can turn into a white cloud

and drift back to elsewhere.

My thoughts go so far away,

like an eastward river.

 

【七律】深秋思远

 

日悬城外野村头，满落红云一树秋。

呼伴引朋群鸟闹，穿林打叶数声幽。

心烛已灭休垂泪，灵目欲穷更上楼。

身似碧云归别处，魂驰千里水东流。

 

(© November, 2023, godog)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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• Wow,古诗词，功底深厚！中英文俱佳！Gone is also their singing sound尤其好！欣赏了！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 07:54:08

• +100086！！！：）） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 09:28:27

• 谢谢鼓励与喜欢！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:54:18

• 身似碧云归别处，魂驰千里水东流。好七律！欣赏学习。占位点赞。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 09:27:33

• +100 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 17:44:35

• 谢谢盈盈！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:55:58

• Take a breath, enjoy the scene, and keep climbing :-) -7grizzly- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 09:35:02

• The higher I climb, the harder I might fall:)) -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:57:14

• Beautifully descriptive with wonderful images -waterfowl- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 16:35:44

• Thanks for your encouraging words! -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:58:05

• 赞双语诗！ -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 17:16:36

• 谢方外兄 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:58:38

• 英文好赞！读起来很舒服。。摄影也好。美诗美片，让人欣赏。。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 03:50:30