原诗五言,试试译成五个 syllables 一行,1,2,4 行押韵。
Beanstalk fire boils Beans,
In the pot sob Beans,
"Beans and Stalks share roots,
Why are Stalks this mean?"
原诗五言,试试译成五个 syllables 一行,1,2,4 行押韵。
Beanstalk fire boils Beans,
In the pot sob Beans,
"Beans and Stalks share roots,
Why are Stalks this mean?"
• 也来个简节的 -心存善念- ♀ (205 bytes) () 11/03/2021 postreply 18:02:18
• 押韵真好。今天真是和绿诗人学习了注意字节,对写歌词也很有帮助 -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/03/2021 postreply 18:21:39
• 恭喜ctaag。首页进来,谢谢网管,受忒忒绿启发,简化7步诗的译文 推荐成功 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2021 postreply 17:48:37