Sea, 枫林音画，偷摸英文文青，被儿子发现，怕被笑话，赶紧虚心请教，结果改了好几处。哈哈 算是合作，it is fun

 

Sea

枫林音画

Alone I sit
upon the shore to night
There she is 
pumping like a dark
deafening heart

I see a shadow
a shadowy ghost 
touching the breasts
sobbing like a baby in the depth
of water that grows cold and pale

Forgive me,
cause I am sailing 
into the night
into that battling sea
to steal the pearl
from the raging sea

Beyond those thousands hills and cliffs
Where you
You are fading into steel
steel waves of the song of mine
singing the story of the unforgiving sea
riding the strings in the symphony of soul

所有跟帖： 

• 枫林枫小林合作得天衣无缝：）真是仿佛交响乐团在和凑在共鸣，和往常曲风明显不同，现在更厚重如山，沉重如海：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2021 postreply 21:28:11

• 好诗好曲！太赞父子合作！ -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/18/2021 postreply 09:22:54

• 音乐弄潮儿 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/18/2021 postreply 10:20:35