众鸟高飞尽
Flying birds have all vanished on high,
孤云独去闲
A lone cloud drifts leisurely from sight,
相看两不厌
Left enjoying each other's company,
只有敬亭山
Are only Jingting Mountain and I.
众鸟高飞尽
Flying birds have all vanished on high,
孤云独去闲
A lone cloud drifts leisurely from sight,
相看两不厌
Left enjoying each other's company,
只有敬亭山
Are only Jingting Mountain and I.
• 最后一句写成: Are only Jingting Mountain and I(是不是就押韵了?)如果这样,be动词该用什么呢 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 12:52:05
• 哈,你这个更好,意思清晰,还和第一第二行押韵。 -ibelieu- ♀ (575 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 13:10:08
• 谢谢大师的分析!现在更明白了:) -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 13:18:24
• 哈,你这个更好,意思清晰,还和第一第二行押韵。 -ibelieu- ♀ (557 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 13:05:37
• 大赞伊比!一二四句押韵,棒棒哒! -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 14:10:00
• 如果enjoying换成动词,去掉are如何? -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 14:11:00
• 感觉均好,也许“are enjoying" 强调了此时此刻? -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 14:23:01