Flocks of birds fly away high
Lonely clouds alone pass by
Who never hate, never leave each other?
Only Jingting Mountain and me
Flocks of birds fly away high
Lonely clouds alone pass by
Who never hate, never leave each other?
Only Jingting Mountain and me
• 淘兄真是快手,意境全有,赞! -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 11:54:00
• 头两句还押了韵! -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 11:56:00
• 谢绿兄!我不太喜欢押韵、格律这些束缚。我发现,诗只要写出心中之妙,句子简单朴素自然,一样可唱,而且好听。:-) -陶陶三- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 12:35:20
• 随性、任性、尽兴,真性情,最高境界;) -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 12:39:00
• 这里面有一个很大的意趣,就是鸟、云都是动的,会消逝的事物,而山是不动的,静止的。所以爱敬亭山,除了山美,还有此静意。 -陶陶三- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/12/2021 postreply 13:49:39