Only just wondering

来源: ibelieu 于 2021-05-16 15:06:50 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (273 bytes)
回答: 多谢！欢迎提建议啊 ～～ 由 天玉之 于 2021-05-16 14:14:58

--- if "flow" is correct in this context.  Maybe "melt"?

---if it would be better to replace "still unravel" with "yet to unravel"?

This is a wonderful poem.  Sorry for the nitpicking.

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