Only just wondering

来源: 于 2021-05-16 15:06:50 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

--- if "flow" is correct in this context.  Maybe "melt"?

---if it would be better to replace "still unravel" with "yet to unravel"?

This is a wonderful poem.  Sorry for the nitpicking.