几处语法错误

来源: 胡华泠 于 2016-12-24 13:05:37 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (239 bytes)
回答: Let's fall into it 由 御宅的风儿 于 2016-12-04 04:50:22

You seem, not you seems

As light, not as a light

too much noise, not too much noises

Too tight, not too tightly

挺好的诗，改了错就不一样了

 

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