几处语法错误

来源: 于 2016-12-24 13:05:37 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

You seem, not you seems

As light, not as a light

too much noise, not too much noises

Too tight, not too tightly

挺好的诗，改了错就不一样了