查了七绝平起,修改如下:
一箋未成淚先流,
水調歌頭持酒吟。
天長日久情永在,
涯边夜夜玉人心。
My tears run down before I have my email done,
having a few sips, to the Shuidiao Getou I recite.
Forever is the universe; you are my dearest one:
without you my heart feels lonely every night!