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一箋未成淚先流，

水調歌頭持酒吟。

天長日久情永在，

涯边夜夜玉人心。

 

My tears run down before I have my email done,

having a few sips, to the Shuidiao Getou I recite.

Forever is the universe; you are  my dearest one:

without you my heart feels lonely every night!