请指正

This high and steep slope of mounting grief

Was brought to existence by a belief

That for each woman there is only one matching man.

But the old punctures read on that ancient leaf:

"Sarah fits David and also Sarah fits Dan

Just like a pair of chopsticks works well with a bowl and a pan"

 

 

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• Good verse -Flyingstraw- ♀ (100 bytes) () 11/13/2015 postreply 13:55:23

• 赞！ -肖庄- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2015 postreply 19:25:58

• 谢谢。 哈哈，读后感。 -youdecide- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2015 postreply 22:21:58

• 谢李定即兴赋诗,给人启迪。不知诗人是否愿意单独发帖,这样更多的网友可以读到？ -斓婷- ♀ (50 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 12:23:31

• 谢谢斓婷。也祝你感恩节快乐。我写得太短。当时也写了第二段的读后感，但我没贴。现在忘了我怎么写的了：） -youdecide- ♂ (202 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 12:34:58

• 真遗憾，下次写了就贴，就不会忘记了。 -斓婷- ♀ (388 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 14:23:49

• 哈哈， 是很有意思：） -youdecide- ♂ (260 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 15:34:36