No Explanation Is Due

本帖于 2015-12-21 18:36:35 时间, 由普通用户 Flyingstraw 编辑

No Explanation Is Due (Nov. 12)

 

I care too much about you

So I feel my heart is chained to a puncture

That no one can refill

My past griefs have piled themselves like a slope

I have desperately to remove it to make the road

 

My friend, I call you so

Even you turn your back with a frown

You never know a heart can be so frail

After you have added too much sadness to its wheel

So, my sentiments are endless

 

I see that inspiration song

And realize that you are different from this you

But my heart controlls its own rhythms

No explanation is due

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Love is no reason. Thanks for sharing the good poem. -南山松- 给 南山松 发送悄悄话 南山松 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/12/2015 postreply 18:06:01

TKS. Have a great weekend. -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/13/2015 postreply 13:44:39

请指正 -youdecide- 给 youdecide 发送悄悄话 youdecide 的博客首页 (451 bytes) () 11/13/2015 postreply 10:03:27

Good verse -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (100 bytes) () 11/13/2015 postreply 13:55:23

赞! -肖庄- 给 肖庄 发送悄悄话 肖庄 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/14/2015 postreply 19:25:58

谢谢。 哈哈,读后感。 -youdecide- 给 youdecide 发送悄悄话 youdecide 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/14/2015 postreply 22:21:58

谢李定即兴赋诗,给人启迪。不知诗人是否愿意单独发帖,这样更多的网友可以读到? -斓婷- 给 斓婷 发送悄悄话 斓婷 的博客首页 (50 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 12:23:31

谢谢斓婷。也祝你感恩节快乐。我写得太短。当时也写了第二段的读后感,但我没贴。现在忘了我怎么写的了:) -youdecide- 给 youdecide 发送悄悄话 youdecide 的博客首页 (202 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 12:34:58

真遗憾,下次写了就贴,就不会忘记了。 -斓婷- 给 斓婷 发送悄悄话 斓婷 的博客首页 (388 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 14:23:49

哈哈, 是很有意思:) -youdecide- 给 youdecide 发送悄悄话 youdecide 的博客首页 (260 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 15:34:36

Flyingstraw诗如泉涌,谢谢分享,周日快乐。 -斓婷- 给 斓婷 发送悄悄话 斓婷 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 11:46:20

Thx .Happy Weekend! -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 12:22:09

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