I really don't see the difference.

本帖于 2013-07-29 07:20:14 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑

"A man" or "One".   What is the difference? How is that an improvement?
Both could be used in a general term. Well, if it would make a poetic difference, then be my guest, change it.

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Yes, it would be a big improvement! -聚曦亭- 给 聚曦亭 发送悄悄话 (711 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:43:52

I thought you'd go there -hammerheadshark- 给 hammerheadshark 发送悄悄话 (245 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 13:31:36

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