Some words got cut off. So here is the complete comment:

来源: 聚曦亭 于 2013-07-21 10:21:30 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (198 bytes)
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And it will improve your version if you change "a man" into "one." "A man" comes from the subconscious conversion from Chinese to English.

 

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• I really don't see the difference. -hammerheadshark- ♀ 给 hammerheadshark 发送悄悄话 (220 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:28:55

• Yes, it would be a big improvement! -聚曦亭- ♀ 给 聚曦亭 发送悄悄话 (711 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:43:52

• I thought you'd go there -hammerheadshark- ♀ 给 hammerheadshark 发送悄悄话 (245 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 13:31:36

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