"一帘幽梦" 英文拼凑版, 请各位大侠斧正,谢谢!

一帘幽梦（刘家昌曲，琼瑶词）

我有一帘幽梦，不知与谁能共？多少秘密在其中，欲诉无人能懂。

窗外更深露重，今夜落花成冢。春来春去俱无踪，徒留一帘幽梦。

谁能解我情衷？谁将柔情深种？若能相知又相逢，共此一帘幽梦！

 

A Pearly Veil of Dreams

I have a fantasy behind the Pearly Curtain

With whom may I share?

In which, a lot of secrets I attempt to reveal

But no one would understand

 

Tonight, with heavy drew and darkness beyond the windows

Falling flowers pile up into mounds

Spring comes and goes without a trace

Leaves me a dream behind the pearly curtain

 

Who can grasp on my affection?

Who will spread tender seeds deeply in heart?

If we could meet and know of each other,

Together, we dream of the curtain dream.

 

所有跟帖： 

• 琢磨 -走马读人- ♂ (43 bytes) () 10/11/2012 postreply 20:35:10

• 哈哈...是不是贴错地方了! 反正还是没看懂. -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2012 postreply 10:48:50

• 来个凑热闹拼凑版 - just for fun~~ -EnLearner- ♂ (643 bytes) () 10/11/2012 postreply 21:38:35

• 愚公很有潜力, 赞一个! -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2012 postreply 10:51:07

• 译的好，谢分享歌曲视频。 -祤湫霖- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2012 postreply 09:21:39

• 谢谢班竹捧场! -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2012 postreply 10:51:35

• 在"中国文艺"网上搜了搜, 央视4台的译本抄了下来. -tingfeng- ♀ (3174 bytes) () 10/12/2012 postreply 10:55:19

• 歌很好听。发誓练完英语就去练唱歌：-）。 -2msmom- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2012 postreply 12:11:39

• 练英文是没边没底事儿,还是想唱就唱吧! 期待你一展歌喉. -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2012 postreply 13:00:33