回复：if this is what the poet wanted to carry out in his poem

unlike HWYS, i am open mind, anything better is always acceptable. YS would not agree with you just for the fact that thers is no mentioning of "pit" in the original, say nothing of "my heart"

Do not be too cruel:) being heart-broken is too much, he was still make a living though it was a hard one, haha, just be kind to leave him some hopes.

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• 不能把逸士气跑了 -sportwoman- ♀ (283 bytes) () 09/20/2012 postreply 15:26:38

• 回复：不能把逸士气跑了 -askerfor- ♀ (198 bytes) () 09/20/2012 postreply 17:00:56

• 没误会啦，两件事情，1)leave 李煜him with some hopes. 2)别气跑逸士. -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/20/2012 postreply 17:08:58

• 我以为你们挤兑他呀 -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/20/2012 postreply 17:12:27

• 回复：我以为你们挤兑他呀 -askerfor- ♀ (55 bytes) () 09/20/2012 postreply 17:33:32

• haha! 是的，恐怕是误解了。才发现熟练掌握让人生气之技术，嵋屿滩舍我其谁！哈！ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/20/2012 postreply 18:03:19

• 回复：haha! 是的，恐怕是误解了。才发现熟练掌握让人生气之技术，嵋屿滩舍我其谁！哈！ -askerfor- ♀ (39 bytes) () 09/20/2012 postreply 19:11:07

• if he gets mad and goes away I will take the responsibility of -sportwoman- ♀ (86 bytes) () 09/21/2012 postreply 11:47:20

• sorry I am going off topic. yes sure we should leave -sportwoman- ♀ (207 bytes) () 09/20/2012 postreply 16:06:32