yugong, here is my corrected version

本帖于 2012-05-09 18:07:35 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑

elaborate用得好。(positive feedback, good!)

elab·o·rate /ɪˈlæbərət/ adjective

[more elaborate; most elaborate] : made or done with great care or with much detail : having many parts that are carefully arranged or planned
▪ They made elaborate preparations for his visit.▪ I see now that her behavior was all part of an elaborate plan/plot/scheme.▪ The dancers were wearing elaborate costumes.▪ He told the story in elaborate detail.▪ an elaborate meal

the last night's difficulty - 觉得这里无须用the? 这好象 the his book 里的 the 是多余的?

这一句:however, the last night’s difficulty in carrying it out caused further tension that a key dialog is under way.

简化了后:

difficulty(主语) caused (谓语)tension(宾语).

假如加上"that a key dialog is under way"that从句在句子里做什么成分?(constructive feedback, yes and no)

 

 here is my corrected version:

U. S. and China had reached an elaborate settelment plan for a blind humane rights activiest; however,last night's difficulty in carring it out caused further tensions but a key dialog is under way.

 

 

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a side note: -tingfeng- 给 tingfeng 发送悄悄话 (390 bytes) () 05/08/2012 postreply 09:40:14

回复:a side note: -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (221 bytes) () 05/08/2012 postreply 22:05:30

婷风,谢谢你周末的关于语调的好贴! -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 NewVoice 的博客首页 (344 bytes) () 05/08/2012 postreply 10:52:44

谢谢新声姐指点! 以后用Word写东西,因为有spell check. -tingfeng- 给 tingfeng 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/08/2012 postreply 14:30:28

顶 - 友情支持! -yingyudidida- 给 yingyudidida 发送悄悄话 yingyudidida 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/08/2012 postreply 11:30:25

谢谢! -tingfeng- 给 tingfeng 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/08/2012 postreply 14:31:59

改得好。 -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (967 bytes) () 05/08/2012 postreply 20:24:26

I c the difference, thank you very much for your feedback. -tingfeng- 给 tingfeng 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/09/2012 postreply 03:22:05

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