About event sequence

来源: Hammerheadshark 于 2012-05-07 04:18:42 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (1198 bytes)
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My intention is that there are only two developmental states of the event: play in the group at the beginning and only two of us left in the end. But if it is confusing, I will think of rephrasing it.

I prefer use “Are” to tell the readers by the time I am writing it, I am still not sure if we were not in love back then or we are actually in love all these years.  Confusing, isn’t it? Throughout the whole story, the writer’s  state of mind is confused.

 

In novels, those mind activities are usually in italics. Maybe in italics?

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• yeah, Italics will work. -非文学青年- ♀ 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (464 bytes) () 05/07/2012 postreply 06:50:03

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