Shark,你客气了,那我就不客气了哈

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回答: sorry, two typos.hammerheadshark2012-05-06 18:38:46

下面这一段的时间顺序有点儿confusing, 不知道是不是highlight部分的时态问题(when I remembered" happened? Are we in love是心里想的话?可能用上引号会好一点儿 )。

或者是因为和前面有点儿重复,我理解的时间顺序是这样:

at the beginning, the two of you played twice a week--then-- you two played the first game with a dozen of players--six months later?--only she and I played table tennis.

Xie was very good at playing table tennis and she was selected to play for our school.  I liked to play table tennis too. At beginning, we played with a group of enthusiasts twice a week.  Gradually, for various reasons, all other members had left the group, and only Xie and I still played regularly. We thus became close friends, so close that we were seen together on all occasions. Other students started keeping a distance from us, all thinking we were a couple.  We did not bother to explain, because we knew the more we tried to explain, the more convinced they would become that we were in love. I remembered the first game we played with a dozen of players, in which we barely talked – she was the center of attention and I did not have a chance.  Now, about six months later, only she and I played table tennis, primarily talking while absent-mindedly playing, to be exact. Sometimes, I was confused too. Are we in love?

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About event sequence -Hammerheadshark- 给 Hammerheadshark 发送悄悄话 (1198 bytes) () 05/07/2012 postreply 04:18:42

yeah, Italics will work. -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (464 bytes) () 05/07/2012 postreply 06:50:03

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