Stop tour -> stop touring (stop touring and start spending ....)
accepted
her free-fall career -> her career in freefall.
I used free-falling career.I think it's ok.
Whitney has died -> Whitney died
This one I learned it from the news. I used "died" yesterday in the title of my post, then noticed all the news reports used "has died". I asked my hubby why they use "has died", he said it is more of a style of news report, indicating the immediate past.
急着出门,不多说了,谢谢姐姐!