谢谢姐姐！

Stop tour -> stop touring (stop touring and start spending ....)

accepted

her free-fall career -> her career in freefall.

I used free-falling career.I think it's ok.

Whitney has died -> Whitney died

This one I learned it from the news. I used "died" yesterday in the title of my post, then noticed all the news reports used "has died". I asked my hubby why they use "has died", he said it is more of a style of news report, indicating the immediate past.

急着出门，不多说了，谢谢姐姐！