Men always set their eyes on beautiful women and found out later that beauty is only skin deep, haha.
It is difficult to write love stories, because they have been told many times. I like the story. In addition to the storyline, I like the way you tell the story. If I interpret it correctly, snow represents the unnamed girl in the story - common and plain, yet pure and beautiful in her own way. Photography is also a very good choice. Even though a photographer can capture the physical beauty of a girl with his camera, he still needs to find the inner beauty in her with his heart.
While reading along, I found a few tiny bricks:
Northern city – northern city
talent in photography – talent at photography
good at composition and color – good at composition and coloring
weight of the snow accumulating on their - weight of the snow accumulated on their
heavy snow deposits on - heavy snow deposited on
Amateur artist with good looks - Amateur artist with a good look
Downright Depressed - Downright depressed
lense – lens
They continued to share what had happened in their lives and exchaneged idea
