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来源: EnLearner 于 2011-09-15 23:17:50 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (725 bytes)
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Please find attached a copy of a news release entitled "ABC Plastic To Feature its Extrusion and Injection Molding Products at the NPE and ANTEC Shows." This news release highlights the output extruder screw.  If I understood correctly, this extruder screw is no longer a viable end product and should not be promoted. This release, to date, has triggered three letter inquiries to the Kansas City office.  However, if we no longer offer this product, it may cause difficulty with potential customers. Would you please advise me on the correct status of this product at your earliest convenience?

 

 

 

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• 不知道原作者的原意。 -EnLearner- ♀ 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/15/2011 postreply 23:24:52

• 对！ -非文学青年- ♀ 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (136 bytes) () 09/15/2011 postreply 23:27:50

• 作者的原意就是想知道那个产品的status -jennea- ♀ 给 jennea 发送悄悄话 jennea 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/15/2011 postreply 23:50:27

• 我还以为人家是给老板写电邮的。 -EnLearner- ♀ 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/16/2011 postreply 21:51:42

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