谢谢愚教授指正！

来源: beautifulwind 于 2011-09-14 20:12:32 [档案] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (568 bytes)

回答: 回复：My attempt. 由 EnLearner 于 2011-09-14 19:18:43

On the Venice Film Festival Awards ceremony?

Agree. awards 应该去掉复数s？

three out of the eight total top awars -- why total?

脑子里自己蹦出来的。去掉。

Tenses are not consistent?

film makers are recognized by the world and they influenced the world

改成they are influencing？

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• 回复：谢谢愚教授指正！ -EnLearner- ♀ (744 bytes) () 09/14/2011 postreply 20:26:03

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