谢谢愚教授指正!

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On the Venice Film Festival Awards ceremony?

Agree. awards 应该去掉复数s?

three out of the eight total top awars -- why total?

脑子里自己蹦出来的。去掉。

Tenses are not consistent?

film makers are recognized by the world and they influenced the world

改成they are influencing?