CO: A very unique perspective！Wonderful writing~

To be frank, sentence structure wise, it's much nicer and clearer than last one. And the way you compare these two books is very original and intriguing.

Wanna yap something on this big topic, but too tired~.

Just a few tiny  "bricks" this time 

As a Chinese immigrant with very similar background

>> with A very similar background 

No matter what your background is, no matter how poor your family is, you have an equal chance to make it in America as long as you work hard.

>> No matter…., no matter are two sentences

No matter….. AND  no matter?

However, near the end of the novel, we see Nan, disgusted by his realization that he has been making up excuses for not writing poems during all these years of pursuing the so-called American Dream, burns a bunch of banknotes.

>> We see Nan…..burn/burning a bunch of banknotes ?

see ***** do/doing sth

 

所有跟帖： 

• 这次的砖都非常精准！大谢！ -非文学青年- ♀ (609 bytes) () 09/11/2011 postreply 22:16:52

• lilac国内也是英文专业毕业的吧。好奇一下。不必回答，如果你不想的话。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/11/2011 postreply 22:30:47

• 汗那，这么会问问题呀, MM~~ -lilac09- ♀ (446 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 08:47:40

• wow~~~~ -好学又好问- ♀ (115 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 08:57:26

• 我觉得好学mm其实也很象英专的。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 09:20:51

• 我是半瓶子酱油。 -好学又好问- ♀ (279 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 09:35:31

• 好学mm博览群书，见多识广，俺真是自愧不如~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 10:07:57

• haha, 我心里平衡了 -非文学青年- ♀ (94 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 09:18:09

• 回楼上好学mm和文青mm~~ -lilac09- ♀ (1077 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 10:06:03

• wow，等于一瓶牛头牌沙茶酱！--牛牛牛啊！！！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (51 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 22:50:11