不过给她看了，她的评语是。。。

来源: jennea 于 2011-09-06 19:13:36 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (415 bytes)
本帖于 2011-09-06 21:41:00 时间, 由普通用户 非文学青年 编辑

Definitely cut this, but first, consider what it has to say (or to offer) and whether the gist can be used in a different sentence. haha

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