不过给她看了，她的评语是。。。

来源: 于 2011-09-06 19:13:36 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

Definitely cut this, but first, consider what it has to say (or to offer) and whether the gist can be used in a different sentence. haha