的确是long way to go啊

我写的文章被ESL老师改成全红色了。错的地方太多了。native speaker的老师就是不一样，chance和opportunity都不让我换着用，因为subtle区别。

You have some problems with subject-verb agreement;  I would help you with this through awareness of count and non-count nouns, singular and plural forms;  there are also some problems with using the correct tense; there are rules for when and why to use a one particular tense in the past time over another tense;  idiomatic expressions are not always used correctly:  this is a matter of practice;  You didn’t stay on topic-your closing paragraph introduces a new topic not mentioned in the main body of the essay.  Lastly, there are some problems with punctuation.  Again, these are rules that can be learned.

这个是ESL对我写的长文就是online hangouts的评价。看看吧。

今天老师还纠正了我好多读音上的错误。

所有跟帖： 

• 你怎么找的ESL teacher? -同学小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:23:49

• 我上社区ESL的课，今天刚开始。我们社区的，一学期才25刀，一周2个上午。 -i999- ♀ (170 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:26:57

• 回复：我上社区ESL的课，今天刚开始。我们社区的，一学期才25刀，一周2个上午。 -i999- ♀ (55 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:27:59

• 谢谢你的信息.我也想想看是否上个这样的课 -同学小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:33:09

• 我们这里也有晚上的班，你可以试试晚上下班后去上。 -i999- ♀ (61 bytes) () 08/30/2011 postreply 16:42:04