的确是long way to go啊

我写的文章被ESL老师改成全红色了。错的地方太多了。native speaker的老师就是不一样，chance和opportunity都不让我换着用，因为subtle区别。

You have some problems with subject-verb agreement;  I would help you with this through awareness of count and non-count nouns, singular and plural forms;  there are also some problems with using the correct tense; there are rules for when and why to use a one particular tense in the past time over another tense;  idiomatic expressions are not always used correctly:  this is a matter of practice;  You didn’t stay on topic-your closing paragraph introduces a new topic not mentioned in the main body of the essay.  Lastly, there are some problems with punctuation.  Again, these are rules that can be learned.

这个是ESL对我写的长文就是online hangouts的评价。看看吧。

今天老师还纠正了我好多读音上的错误。