谢谢姐姐！

来源: lmao 于 2011-08-23 09:03:29 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (377 bytes)

我只看到这一个有点儿扎眼：

My voice was often lost among my noisy siblings and chatty classmates, feeling alone even among a roomful of people.

现在feeling的主语成了my voice.

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• 太对了，我马上改。 -NewVoice- ♀ 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (85 bytes) () 08/23/2011 postreply 09:29:19

• 啊！文青冒头啦， 太好啦！ -同学小薇- ♀ 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 同学小薇 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2011 postreply 12:52:31

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